Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
These days masses opt to buy ready made food rather than cooking their meals at home. Although purchasing packed food has various merits , but its excess consumption cause many detrimental effects on the human body.This essay will discuss on both the benefit and drawbacks of buying ready made food.
The predominant advantage of purchasing ready made food is time saving. In modern era, inflation is growing at an increasing rate, so both male and female are working in order to provide proper living standard to their offspring's. Because of job, both have busy work schedule which do not allow them to have leisure time of cooking. Consequently they are running their life smoothly by consuming ready made dishes. Additionally, this trend is also providing the employment opportunities to many people as the number of food outlet are mushrooming like any thing from the past few years.
On the other hand, as every coin has two sides, same is with change also. Their adverse effects on the health of the people. Home made food is rich in many healthy ingredients which is lacking in purchased food, as they many preservatives are added in food which we purchase from the hotels or the restaurants. It is scientifically proven the, due to intake of only ready made food many diseases are caused because it contain excess oil and species. Apart from this, another demerit of choosing ready made food is break down of families. In yester years mother use to prepare the cook with love and whole family sit and eat together with harmony, but now every individual is buying according to their own taste.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that people are preferring to consume ready made food because it saves time and allow them to work for extra hours. Youngsters are also able to find jobs in food industries because of this trend, but its various negative ramifications on health and family cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93518518519 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57865613365 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7314637124 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216004316173 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721782190485 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696510053358 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137394643748 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310493085026 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.