Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?
These days people are spending huge amount of money on marriage occassions in almost all the part of the world. There are numerous factors for this expenditure. While people may have valid reasons for putting money lavisly, but I assert that this trend has detrimental effects on both individuals and society.
Pitching into the first area of discussion, the predominant reason for this expenditure is show off to the society, nowadays people wants to maintain their social status and display their financial status among the society. For example the trend of opting destination wedding is becoming popular among youth. They take their friend and relatives to the specific location for celebrating their special day. The choice of destination display their marriage budget and catches people's attention. Apart from this, youngsters want to have the memory of their weeding day and the best way to capture moments have the video and pictures of the marriage day, which force them to spend lavisly on this. Because of this social and emotional reason people become extravagent while planning their marriage budget.
However, this trend of putting excess money on wedding is not at all a wise option. People has to think about their future and try to nest their money for the future need. They can save the money and use it in much better way like providing education and quality life to their childrens. Marriage is all about love and harmony among the partner. Spending more money will not going to help them to have a better life. Moreover, many people are not economically sound enough to spend on this single day function. Many times they feel neglected from the community and leading to lack of social life for them. Therefore, this trend is having adverse effects on both people and community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39440087612 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.018873397 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978384464241 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382325369022 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277782345446 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731043984016 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110227816262 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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