Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?
In today’s contemporary world, the wedding has become a multi-billion industry all around the world. The primary reason for such expensive weddings, in comparison to the past, is massive salary packages which are the result of globalization. I believe, it is definitely a positive trend on a personal perspective.
The prime reason for such costly weddings is highly paid jobs, which have increased drastically in the past few decades due to globalization. This is an explanation of why people nowadays, could afford luxurious lifestyles and celebrate all the festivities; especially, weddings with great zeal and enthusiasm. It is a trend now that the host of the wedding family hires a wedding planner, who charges a fortune for their services, to plan a theme wedding for them, by ensuring that it is much bigger and unique in style in comparison to their near and dear one's weddings. As it is a way for them to show-off their higher-status. In a recent survey conducted by Shadi.com concluded that in the 1980s a marriage coasted Rs500 per person, but now it has been escalated to Rs 2000 per person. Thus, a wedding these days is directly proportional to one's glamorous lifestyle and the money in the pocket.
Moreover, I believe that it is a positive change because a wedding is a once in a lifetime celebration and people feel that it should be celebrated grandly. Therefore, they do not want to leave any stone unturned to ensure that this day remains rememberable in their mind. Hence, when they look back on this day they should feel the same excitement as they did on their the-day. Hence, on a personal satisfaction note, I believe it is a positive development.
To conclude, although the wedding expenses have reached sky-high, I feel that in today’s world, the wedding is celebrated to form a connection between the wed-lock couple the celebrations, so that they can relate themselves with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96583850932 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02889935756 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5940160535 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968646026369 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343701457434 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244457949171 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571237478894 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198137486032 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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