In many countries weddings are becoming bigger than the past? Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?
These days people are spending huge amount of money on wedding occassions. The are numerous factors which leads motivate or forces people to spend money lavisly on one day function. While people many have reasons for this expenditure but I assert that it will have detrimental effects on both individuals and society as a whole.
Pitching into the first area of discussion, the predominant reason for this excess expenditure is show off to the society. Marriage functions nowadays are displaying the social status of the person and their financial strength. For example the trend of having destination wedding is becoming popular among youngsters they take their family and friends to the different location for celebrating their special day. The choice of destination certainly depends upon the marriage budget and catches peoples attention. Apart form this, everyone wants to keep the memory of their wedding alive and the best way to capture the moment is to have video and picture. Because of this emotional and social reasons individuals are becoming extravagant while planning their wedding budget.
However, it is not at all a wiser choice to spend excess amount on wedding functions rather it will be better to nest the money for future needs. It will be wise to plough the money for many other important thing like for providing proper education and quality life to the childrens. Moreover, many people are not economically sound to spend huge amount on single day function. Many times they feel neglected and not considered part of the community. Therefore, putting huge sum of money on marriage ultimately causing adverse effects in many ways.
In conclusion, unequivocally expenditure on marriages and have bigger celebration is becoming increasingly popular in present than the previous years, but it will harms to the masses and better to save the money for further needs
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| 2019-04-08 | Richa Dhiman | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21967213115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6745860191 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2672185393 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136876028951 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480599500343 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347065389122 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848328160786 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172104635222 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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