Letter to a friend, Your friend son is going to visit your country for his holiday, she want him to stay in your home. But you can not accommodate hum
Write a letter
-Apology to your friend
-explain why he can not stay with you
-give her suggestion for her sons arrangement during holidays
Dear Jan,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health. I am writing in response to your letter which I have received yesterday.
I completely understand your concern about getting the safe and friendly atmosphere for your son to stay in my country. I wish I could help you out by providing suitable in my place. However, unfortunately we are living in two bedroom apartment, with no room vacant. As my sons have grow up but they both are also sharing common rooms and in another room me and my husband are living.
It will be impossible for me to provide any space to live in my house. We are not having separate guest room and the drawing room is also not spacious and t is quite noisy. It was hard for me deny your request but I was not left with any other option.
However, I can definitely help you in finding suitable accommodation in one of my relatives house. Undoubtedly they will ask for suitable rent, but they are living in prime location with all the facilities in vicinity. Transportation cost can be saved because all the tourist sights are near.
Once again sorry. I hope you will find my suggestions useful.
Yours truly,
Maninder Kaur
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-31 | vadhrahmanjit@gmail.com | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ere for your son to stay in my country. I wish I could help you out by providing ...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
...ortunately we are living in two bedroom apartment, with no room vacant. As my sons have g...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...t, with no room vacant. As my sons have grow up but they both are also sharing commo...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...use all the tourist sights are near. Once again sorry. I hope you will find my su...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66346153846 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58687801603 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6511554975 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46666666667 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245543123226 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783616917569 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771473067763 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120277655841 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454024064842 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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