You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
2. Explain why you must change your plans.
3. Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Jan,
How ae you? Hope your heal and hearty! I am writing to apologize for the sudden change in the plan which we have made last month.
I was very much awaiting for my trip to your country. As you have told a lot about England. Moreover, the excitement was more to meet you and to make a most enjoyable trip together.
However, I will not able able to make it on the day we have planned. Actually, you remember my cousin Tom he was our senior in the school and we have played badminton together in school days. He is visiting India and the good news is that he has succeed in pursuing Jag to marry him. I guess I have told you he story when we have meet last. The marriage is on the 22 march, same day when I have to leave for our vacations, my flight for 22 march was already booked, all the family members along with Tom are forcing to attend and i can't deny as it is most special day for my cousin.
I will be free on the second week of April, you tell whether yo can make it or say about the most convenient time to you.
Hope you will forgive me, sorry once again.
Looking to hear from you soon, love to all family.
Yours truly
Maninder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jan, How ae you? Hope your heal and hearty! I...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
...ve made last month. I was very much awaiting for my trip to your country. As you have to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h awaiting for my trip to your country. As you have told a lot about England. More...
^^
Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: able
... trip together. However, I will not able able to make it on the day we have planned. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
... India and the good news is that he has succeed in pursuing Jag to marry him. I guess I...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 517, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: attending
...mily members along with Tom are forcing to attend and i cant deny as it is most special d...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 531, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...long with Tom are forcing to attend and i cant deny as it is most special day for...
^
Line 7, column 533, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ng with Tom are forcing to attend and i cant deny as it is most special day for my c...
^^^^
Line 15, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon, love to all family. Yours truly Maninder
^^^^^
Line 17, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all family. Yours truly Maninder
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, look, moreover, second, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1798245614 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04656379354 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1908100158 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0714285714 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244006327672 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971263498229 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518129078792 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131921707034 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484051373205 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.