You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
2. Explain why you must change your plans.
3. Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Mark,
I hope that you are doing well. I am writing this to inform you that we have to post pound our trip for a week.
I have Promised you to join on a trip to Dubai that organised on 22nd of February, I was very much excited because we have not planned any trip after completing our college and this is out first excursion. I was very much happy and delighted to spend time with you away from my tiresome working schedule.
We have to make some changes in our planning because my sister will be coming to our home for a month in February. As you already know that she lives in USA after marriage and she never visited to our house since last 9 years. You can understand the reason that why we would change our plan.
You must be feeling sad about change in plan but you will be delighted to hear that I have spoken to our tour organizer. He mentioned that cancellation is not possible but we can change the dates. I am flexible to any day after 1st of march for a much awaited trip, though you have to check your schedule and confirm the next dates to our organizer.
Sorry again and let me know your ideas.
Best Wishes,
Shivam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to post pound our trip for a week. I have Promised you to join on a trip to ...
^
Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ollege and this is out first excursion. I was very much happy and delighted to sp...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35159817352 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17646858276 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584474885845 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.256344769 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242284786129 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924882474527 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517854394369 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142356030204 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491846114695 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.