You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
2. Explain why you must change your plans.
3. Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Assad,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty. I am writing in reference to inform you that I will not be able to go on holiday to Singapore next week. Let me explain the reason.
As you aware that we have planned this trip for some time and travelling to Singapore for vacation had always been on my mind as it is one of the alluring tourist destinations with beautiful gardens and mesmerizing beaches. Additionally, your friendly company would have made this a memorable trip. To elucidate the reason for the change in plan has been due to recent structural changes in my company which led to high attrition rate which consequently has contributed to additional work pressure, therefore, I need to reschedule my holiday plan for a couple of months.
Alternatively, I would suggest planning a long vacation towards the end of June as it would be the best time to visit Singapore moreover by then the company would also have filled in replacements. Let me know what you think.
I look forward to your response
Cheers
Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77348066298 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77694529477 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.259652266 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233174060112 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999064300663 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587087596416 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163235253709 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759566362286 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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