U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.
Write a letter to your friend:
1- Describe the file
2- Ask him to return it to you by post
3- Ask him about the approximate cost of sending the documents.
Dear Rora,
Hi, my friend! how's it going so far? We haven't met each other since I left your home. that's why I really want to say again that thank you to all your family permitting to stay over at your apartment. As you know, I went to Austrailia because of a business seminar, but I think that I lost something which was belonged to the business trip. Perhaps, the document is on your drawer while modifying conditions.
The document is covered with clear plastic and attached by my enterprise's name. If you don't mind, can you send to me by post as soon as possible? The boss pesters me in order to meet a deadline. causing a lot of problems which caused by my mistake.
Needless to say, I will transfer money you cost so let me know how much money costs and how long it will take. I'm so grateful all your effort.
Best wishes,
MJ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hows
Dear Rora, Hi, my friend! hows it going so far? We havent met each oth...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: how's
Dear Rora, Hi, my friend! hows it going so far? We havent met each oth...
^^^^
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...Hi, my friend! hows it going so far? We havent met each other since I left your home. ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
... met each other since I left your home. thats why I really want to say again that tha...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... met each other since I left your home. thats why I really want to say again that tha...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'staying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: staying
...thank you to all your family permitting to stay over at your apartment. As you know, I ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of a business seminar, but I think that I lost something which was belonged to t...
^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...attached by my enterprises name. If you dont mind, can you send to me by post as soo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Causing
...pesters me in order to meet a deadline. causing a lot of problems which caused by my mi...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... money costs and how long it will take. Im so grateful all your effort. Best wi...
^^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l all your effort. Best wishes, MJ
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37341772152 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3443109741 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70253164557 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4998993557 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.5833333333 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259792057136 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779991181073 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637316250292 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157323551058 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977278348419 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.