Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party
-Why you will not be able to attend
-How you enjoyed working with him/her
-How you will keep contact with him/her
Dear my friend,
How are you doing recently? I haven't kept in touch with you since I got pregnant. I've heard from Kaith the farewell party for you is held in your house on march 7th. Unfortuneatly, my newborn will be born the beginning of march so I've decided to reserve luxourious nursery facility in advanced.
Can you remember we promoted each other as soon as we employed? To have unpredictable the promotion since our enterprise established. Even though there were still unforgettable moments, we had made honored times between us.
I was willing to attend your fancy party for celebrating your last memory in the workplace as well. However I hope you comprehend my situation becuase it is out of my control. I wish I cope with everything well after I give a birth I am going to be in touch not only ringing a call, but also visiting your household.
P.S. I'm going to attach my sonogram of fetus, please let me know between my husband and I which one is much more familiar with.
Best wishes,
MJ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear my friend, How are you doing recently? I havent kep...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...nd, How are you doing recently? I havent kept in touch with you since I got preg...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...in touch with you since I got pregnant. Ive heard from Kaith the farewell party for...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... will be born the beginning of march so Ive decided to reserve luxourious nursery f...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uxourious nursery facility in advanced. Can you remember we promoted each other ...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., we had made honored times between us. I was willing to attend your fancy party...
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Line 10, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...r last memory in the workplace as well. However I hope you comprehend my situation becu...
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Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...lso visiting your household. P.S. Im going to attach my sonogram of fetus, p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68824602049 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3837615097 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209924008179 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689953405713 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496637330451 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111872105498 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797870533686 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.