You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exerciseand avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days people are becoming more concerned with remaining healthy and avoiding illness. There are several ways people stay healthy in my country, Australia. The key aspects are diet, exercise and rest, and stress reduction.
Most Australians understand that it is necessary to eat well and eat regularly. Having three good meals a day and actually taking time to eat properly is important. This means trying to have a balanced diet of protein (fish, meat or eggs) and vegetables and fruit, for breakfast, lunch and dinner.
It is sometimes difficult to find time to exercise every day, but if we can manage to do some physical exercise a few days a week, then we will feel better for it. We will also sleep more soundly and peacefully.
Australians enjoy outdoor sports, swimming and cricket in summer, and football in winter.
Many Australians relax by walking or even, these days, practising yoga. Relaxing helps us to remain calm and reduce stress. The best way of reducing stress, however, is to understand what is causing it.
If we have too many things to do, it is best to make a list, and then to organize what we have to do according to how important each item is. Taking control is the best way to lower anxiety levels.
So, in Australia, with our wonderful climate and the availability of good fresh food, it is not difficult to stay healthy. By taking control of our lives and planning, we will all feel less stressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.824 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54723065308 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6072748785 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.375 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107520057047 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351986821831 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383051539127 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483938729355 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521603545137 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.