College students who work while studying vs regular learners
Some people claimed that focusing on doing one thing better than doing many things. So, college students take jobs and another spend full-time for learning, which is really more beneficial?
On the one hand, in general belief that concentration is one of the most important abilities one should have because they can work in a flexible way and bring about so many sweet fruits such as gaining high score,being good students, etc. This is a reason why some support students who usually go to school. Moreover, full-time students have higher potential to find something new rather than their friends with doing some jobs. Since someone who spend their all mind to do something is probably to find the truth or create the new one, which might be in comparison to Thomas Edition still went on doing experiments after many failures.
On the other hand, the alternatives to concentrating on studying without doing any jobs is not an absolutely great idea. Nowadays, After graduation from the university, youngsters have to face a lot of major difficulties in practical situation such as problem-solving skills, body language, and so forth. All of these can be called “soft skills”. Why they lack these essential factors to make successes in the competitive job market. Never doing any part-time jobs while they have free time to take more experiences in real life, which is the most appropriate reply. Because there are variety ways of learning, it is not just at school or university.
In conclusion, I would like to take a quote: “school is not only the path to succeed, but school is the fastest path to succeed”. There are myriad of choices. Students should take a balance between studying and working. If some does not take jobs, should try once.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a flexible way" with adverb for "flexible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s one should have because they can work in a flexible way and bring about so many sweet fruits su...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , being
... sweet fruits such as gaining high score,being good students, etc. This is a reason wh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, still, while, in conclusion, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02372881356 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78423765442 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8362113537 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104798768191 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343284523394 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455029756394 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600839046545 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018284659076 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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