You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.
You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sirs,
I was one of the passengers who took the flight from Narita (Tokyo) to Heathrow (London) on 5 August. Unfortunately, my suitcase did not come out after the flight. Although I have explained this Mr. McDonald who was in charge at the Luggage Claim Office I have not heard from him as of now.
My suit case is grey Samsonite whose size is 10 x 95 cm. There are 3 steckers on one side and 1 heart shaped stecker on the other side. My initials "AR" are also written on both sides.
There are a few books and a copy of my thesis in that suitcase which I need for the conference on 19 Aug...
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Although I have explained this Mr. McDonald who
Although I have explained this to Mr. McDonald who
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 163 200
No. of Characters: 676 1000
No. of Different Words: 117 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.573 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.147 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.3 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 42 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 23 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.982 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.167 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.75 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4