Topic: People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these proplems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller rigional towns?
It is true that urban residents cope with a range of difficult challenges in their daily life in recent years, which includes environmental pollution and expensive cost of living as majority. Therefore, the authorities should take actions to move some people to the smaller towns.
There are two important problems that people in large cities must face. Firstly, the ecosystems are becoming polluted due to a mount of contaminants, such as water contamination from factories and exhausted fumes from industrial activities and transports. This has devastating impacts on the habitat an health of humans, which presents through the decline of atmosphere quality and increase the incidence of cancer and respiratory diseases. Secondly, habitants in big cities must pay for the expensive living costs. Many people do not get a stable jobs and lucrative incomes, as a result, covering the high accommodation and travelling expenses and many types of bill is extremely difficult.
Therefore, it is necessary to the governments propose the emigration policies to reduce the pressure on the cities. These policies might cut down on the carbon dioxide emissions and limit traffic congestion by decreasing the volume of private vehicles. Furthermore, living in small towns eases the financial burden to urban residents thank to lower living costs in there. They might enable to expend money on improving the quality life.
In conclusion, the large cities include many negative issues which people have to confront, thus resident movement to smaller cities is an efficient solution to diminish pressure on large cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44621513944 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86075197157 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9401562001 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282430765616 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905315540247 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837157327554 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152282871168 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368401954007 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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