Most school offors some type of physical education program to their students. Why it is important? Should phisical education classes be required?
Physical education becoming most essantial for students to enrich mental and physical health. It has paramount of benefits and i think physical education is compulsorily required. This eassy will discuss the advatages of fitness education.
To embark on, importance of physical education. First of all, students' overall, mental and physical development can possible throught it. Pupil's stamina and stranght can be enhace.morever, through physical activity student can learn team spirit, coexistence, cooperation, and leadership. Secondly, student can get rid from hactic frasteting lectures. It is stress reliver for disciples. Phisical education makes stydents fit and fine. For instence, it is scientifically proven that pupil who swithes phisical education they are more likely mentaly and phisicaly stronger than others.
However, on the other side of coin. There are many other essantial subjects for students to perform well. Maths, science, computer and art are the most useful subjects to get career aspects. Secondly, pupil already have burden of other subject performance therefore, phisical education is not favorable in some schools. Finally, physical education sometimes can not possible in some schools which does not have enough time and management.
To conclude it, physical education is essantial for students' mental and physical health. In my opinion, pyisical esucation should be compulsory.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8309178744 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86818229824 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5725293491 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1764705882 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25999987589 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826663829501 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692333261513 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171574880148 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200149784333 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.65 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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