Succsess people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The desire of being successful is one of the greatest part of our lives. Although this relies on many different things, the ways which people attempt and do their work are the most important part of success path. Some people believe that success people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Others disagree. In my view, people who only do what they know how to do well are more successful than the others for two important reasons.
First, we can save more time by doing our work in the way which we have experienced it before and we have enough knowledge about it. When you intend to do a range of tasks which close you to your aim, you can do more things in a period of time if you do them in the way which you know how to do well. For example, last year I had a short time to get prepare to my Spanish exam. However it was not my native language and I’ve never faced with it before, I didn’t take risks to choose new way for preparing and I studied for it as I had studied for my another foreign language exam three years ago and finally, I passed it successfully. As you know, if I had chosen to study on a new way, I have lost at least two weeks of my whole twelve weeks to just get familiar with the way.
Second, when you decide to do things on new ways if you get confused in the middle of your way, you may not be able to distinguish the right way from the wrong one as well as you have not had any similar situation in your past life to get help from them. For instance, when I was a teenager I lived in a village that was surrounded by mountains and my father and I climbed one of those mountains every Friday. The way which we climbed was safe and we knew it very well. A day we decided to take a new way and after four hours we reached a steep cliff which we were not able to pass it. Not only did not we reached the top of mountain, but also got lost. As we could not find the right way, we had to call emergency station to help us to get rid of that terrible situation. This experience taught me that how trying a new way can be risky and face you with difficulties and also led you to being got stuck in the middle of the way of your advancement.
In sum, whether you save your time and act sufficient by choosing the way which you are familiar with it or avoiding to try a risky way which may confuse you in the middle of your way and lead
you away from your chief purpose, the way that you try in order to get successful is very important part of your success path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ance is an important part of our lives. However this may not be ideal, our clothes dete...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
...t to show that you have fun and you are relax you wear your leisure clothes and when ...
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Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s and I went to my class in university. However this may not be normal, I did it and th...
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Line 2, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l clothes. As a result, that day I found my leisure clothes were the things which...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y roles, my special clothes kept me away . This experience taught me that by diffe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt and also people treat you different. In sum, not only you're clothe&apos...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...That is why we should agree that clothes influence our behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50895140665 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50095644969 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427109974425 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8156001924 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9523809524 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.54932066743 0.236089414692 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20255329354 0.076458572812 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226891897868 0.0737576698707 308% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.387122017631 0.150856017488 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109132886106 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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