You are not satisfied with the changing room in a sports centre that you visit.
Write a letter to the manager of this sports centre. In your letter, explain:
– what the problem is
– how you feel about the problem
– what steps you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I would like to bring to your notice that changing room of " Kolkata Sport Complex" has several several issues, which I noticed in my last match with Delhi. Firstly, air conditioning is not working at all working, and it is quite unpleasant in hot and humid weather. In addition, mirrors fitted on the wall are very old, and refection of images are not proper.
After playing a match in such tough environment, players wants a relaxation time in changing room to plan their match. A faulty air conditioning room makes the situation unpleasant. On the top of that, old mirror make the thing worst, as player need to check their attire properly, especially body-guards that to be worn at the back.
Air conditioning issue is very easy to resolve, as only ON-OFF button is faulty, whereas all mirrors need to be replaced as soon as possible.
I hope all my concerns will be well taken care and will be resolved soon. Thanks in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu Kalita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: several
... ' Kolkata Sport Complex' has several several issues, which I noticed in my last matc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, well, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71302174474 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678362573099 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7852436706 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0576551913484 0.216113520407 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0201069300436 0.0766984524023 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279580637994 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0259669097789 0.12726935374 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272414315393 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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