Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?
What is your opinion on that?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In today's job market, majority of the top-level posts are occupied by Males. Although a section of people support the idea of reservation in high-level jobs for women, I do not accord with this notion at all, and will explain in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, men and women are given equal opportunity in every sector now-a-days. However, most of the job sectors are male dominated, so does the top-levels such as CEOs, MDs and Directors of organization. The idea of reservation is not at an encouraging idea for any society because reservation creates division in the society, and it deprives the eligible one. Let’s say, government impose 30% reservation for women in every sector of job, and what if in particular job the female applicants are extremely low, then what will happen: undeserving candidate will be selected or deserving talented male candidate may face rejection because of reservation?
I do agree that in few places women are not given equal importance such as in manufacturing industry, construction farms etc. as these sector demands more physical labor. Therefore, it is obvious that the managing levels will be captured by males in these particular sectors. However, by using technology, hard physical labor can be done with ease. For instance, in Japan, 50% women are working in every sector, even in manufacturing and mining, as they use robotic arms in heavy lifting. Thus, all works can be done by any gender. Secondly, mental ability of women are better than man, as a result in many IT farms, analytical and marketing ventures are hiring women. Therefore, several giants in these sectors are handled by women. Does these industries demand any reservation for men? It is just the utilization of resources wisely and nurturing them properly.
To recapitulate, reservation has nothing to do with empowering women. As a whole, government and society must encourage woman to participate in every job, but should not support reservation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15527950311 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9093528383 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.3569449482 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270608821073 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807359693457 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475003263006 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177677827464 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183262446784 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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