There is no doubt that nowadays our environment needs to be protected from all risks and danger it faces. Some people argue that this a duty people should carry out. Many others blame governments for any problems the environment may face. Personally, I believe that it is the responsibility of both people and governments. This essay shall discuss both views in details.
On one hand, some people believe that individual attitude is the prime method for protecting our blue planet for several reasons. Firstly, most reports about pollution blame people for elevating environmental problem by throwing away their garbage and waste products carelessly. Furthermore, many factory owners are not following current regulations regarding getting rid of their remains and sewage. Consequently, the marine life, as an example, is facing a major threat nowadays, such as extinction of some species and destroying many habitats. Accordingly, this group is recommending fixing this problem by stating the title, “Start by yourself”.
On the other hand, many people believe governments could resolve the environmental problems, since they hold the power for doing so, especially the money power. This group are calling the authorities to spend more on awareness campaigns, believing that such action will encourage people to stop polluting and harming the environment. At the same time, it is believable that money should be directed towards providing some environmental friendly products, such as car filters that reduces carbon release, as well as finding alternative for plastic bags that is considered not biodegradable. Overall, those groups are actually focusing on convincing the governments to take further actions towards solving this problem by all means, especially the financial means.
However, environment could never be taken care of without the collaboration between people and governments. For instance, governments could not protect the habitats while people are breaking the laws daily. At the same time, people are not to be blamed, if there were not any laws issued towards such attitude. Therefore, hand in hand, people and governments could protect the environment together.
To sum up, environment protection is believed to be a role carried out by people, according to some. This could be accomplished by improving our attitude towards the environment. The opposing group recommend resolving problems facing species and protecting habitats by proper funding and issuing laws. Finally, I believe that as long as people and governments work together, such responsibility could be carried out with perfection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59351620948 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99180165973 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556109725686 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7523950142 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.954545455 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.31818181818 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276322517535 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858437556537 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704654958825 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161688489528 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600803424997 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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