Nowadays, environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual person or individual country. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems have never been related to a single person, it is always collective and managing them should also be at a larger scale. hence I strongly agree that problems related to environments should be tagged as international.
In today's world, there are bigger problems such as pollution, traffic, depleting resources, excessive use of combustible materials, wastes from factories etc all of which add to the condition of our environment. Today we breathe contaminated air, drink contaminated water and eat food that is high in pesticides. The wars that are being fought have a more grave impact on nature. All of these examples are not created by a single person nor by a single country, the impact is much bigger than we can imagine. hence this issue should be termed as international and there should be measures taken at the global level to help fight these problems.
A study suggested that if there is no reduction in the carbon footprint and it continues to be released at the pace as it is today, the day is not far where we would be covered in smog and we would have to buy oxygen cylinders to survive.
Many countries have understood the urgency of the situation and how quickly things are escalating. They joined hands together to form international forums, whose agenda is to deal with the problems of mother nature and come up with policies.
hence in order to bring the nature to its purest form and to make sure that our future generation still gets to see the mountains and beaches, breathe fresh air, drink pure water from the natural sources. it is important that we put in conscious efforts to follow the policies made and reduce the waste in the environment. reducing carbon footprint is a good start towards achieving the desired result for the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87296416938 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71901330409 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7962713369 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150452011751 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514244733288 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509799789167 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816159873213 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653146885768 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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