Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
leadership comes naturally, and one cannot learn to be a leader.
Leadership includes many skills, such as confidence, good communication and intelligence, but a lot of abilities that can learn. I disagree the statement that people cannot learn to be a leader and leadership comes naturally.
Firstly, a ability of communicating should learn from practicing. This skill is not everyone have and not everyone can get easily. For example, my father is a businessman. As a businessman, the most important thing is to be good at communicating with his customers. Nevertheless, my father was a very silent person when he was young. In order to develop communicating skill, he went to the stree to chat with others. Afyer a long time, he became a good communicating person, even he can learn anout a stranger's interests after their first communication. The communicating skill can be built by hard working.
Secondly, self-confidence can be built by working hard to achieve goals. That is because if people achieve their goals, they will feel exciting and confidence. Then, they will be confidence to next goal. By a lot of successes, people's self-confidence is built. For example, when I was in high school, I always failed in math exam. In order to pass the final exam, I set a series of goals. The first is to pass the week exam. When I passed the week exam, I got confidence. The following month exam, I also passed the exam. I got more confidence. Last, I passed the final exam.
Admittedly, intelligence is natural and everyone have different level of intelligence. As we all know, Einstein is a famous scientist and his intelligence is higher than others. Of course, he became a successful person but he is not a good leader. Intelligence is not necessary to a leader.
In conclusion, leadership can be learned and people can use themselves efforts to become a leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...leadership comes naturally. Firstly, a ability of communicating should learn f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93464052288 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16835079359 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7160154927 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0769230769 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7692307692 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.57692307692 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183347153295 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052604987894 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115283272455 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13876535469 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132406319082 0.0645574589148 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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