More and more children are using Mobile phones. Some people think it is good and some think it is bad thing? What is your opinion?
Technology is more unconventional and is growing hastily. Almost everyone uses mobile devices, laptops, printers, etc. to complete the daily tasks which is increasing their dependency on the modern technology. Children are also influenced with the latest technology and started using mobile phones for everything. In this essay we will discuss about the positive or negative impact of using mobile phones by children along with the arguments based on the facts.
Mobile devices, these days becoming the fundamental need of human life. Children also comes in this category as the use of mobile phones has been increased by them as well. Mobile phones play a crucial part from the school days as all important information which is required by an individual is available via software approach as well as it presents knowledge interestingly, which helps to grab information faster than other sources like books. Mobile phones these days are also emerging, it not only gives a user interface to operate, but also has given access to internet which enables it to connect to different parts of the world. It also helps one to build social relationship or making acquaintances because there are many applications which makes it possible.
Whereas, on the other hand, mobile phones have some bad impact on children. As I mention earlier, mobile phone has internet access which helps to connect to different webpages and information, it also unbolts the gate to some inappropriate webpages which create negative impact on children. They may learn something which is not good for them or not required for them to know. Performance and maintenance is also one of the key disadvantage.
At the end I would conclude this as, mobile phone is a great discovery, though is a curse at the same time. It has positive as well as negative impact on children. In my opinion, use of mobile phones should be allowed to children but it should be under supervision of their parents. Government should take corrective action plan about the use of Mobile Phones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76308472331 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532738095238 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8579571872 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183565048421 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644003762748 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052011713483 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118850467344 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370425734016 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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