You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, nowyou are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter
Describe the work you have been doing
Explain why you can no longer do this work
Recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing with regard to my duty at your hospital. I am an office clerk at casualty section and work there for office hours from February 3rd. I do this as a volunteer in order that I can achieve experience and help to society. However, I cannot continue cooperation with your hospital anymore.
Last month, I applied for a job vacancy in Paris, and the previous day I received an email from that company which told I have to start my career on June 23rd. Although I have three weeks till that time, I need to free my time to manage my trip. So it is not possible for me to continue my responsible at your hospital.
I would like to suggest that one of my close friends can undertake my duty. She was my classmate at university and has an inherent tendency to do volunteering job. Because she has the same knowledge as me and has previous experience, I think she can be appropriate for this position. I hope that my request does not cause any inconvenience to you.
Thanks for your support.
Kind regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70466321244 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64121544148 2.54303337028 143% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9593412841 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8461538462 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144162470532 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052740753957 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336404339998 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713437403346 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466225763305 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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