You have recently retired from a government job. It has been over two months and you have not received your pension order yet.
Write a letter to the company manager informing about this and troubles that you have been facing.
In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain the situation
describe your difficulties and expectations from the development
Dear Mr. Lorenty,
My name is Jay Larosa and I worked at your organization for twenty years in a row. My last working day was April 1, 2019. I am writing this letter to inform you about my pension order which is still pending with your company, Sun Life Financials.
It has been more than two months but I have no clue on my pension order processing. I tried to contact pension helpdesk but they asked me to send documents related to my employment. I had submitted the required documents on the same day to the helpdesk team.
Now, I was trying to reach them but they did not respond. Currently, I am not getting paid and I do not have any other source of income. Due to this, I am facing some financial difficulties, even, I am not able to buy clothes. I would like to ask you to process my pension funds as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Jay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39880952381 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5106843684 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684523809524 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0061056791 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5833333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240867004444 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796403107503 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081007909812 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134210468116 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239093354428 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.