All parents want the best opportunities for their children . There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for children’s future
Discuss both the sides and give your own opinion
There is no doubt that schools lay out the foundation for students during their formative years. However, while some people opine that they should be only taught skills in schools, I believe that teaching wide range of subjects is more beneficial for their future .
Firstly it is vital to consider that schools play an indispensable role in child’s education .People who believe that the students should master the skills at school itself itself may argue that it has become essential to survive in today’s modern world with cut-throat competition. This means that if they are taught something starting from their formative years then there is better prospect for them to excel in that field once they enter the working world. As a result if this,our society will be equipped with competent workforce .For instance , effective communication is the basis of every profession so if this skill is ingrained in the students right from their childhood then it will be more beneficial to them in their career .
However, I believe that instead of restricting them to only limited skills, students should be taught wide range of subjects in the school. They should therefore be given liberty to choose their field of interest once they enter the university and can master that subject . According to me,this approach will give them the sense of autonmy and studies have shown that autonmy is the necessary catalyst for impetus and drive. Furthermore , I feel that all the subjects are useful in different spheres of life so even a superficial understanding of these subjects at school level can e helpful in their career .For instance , mathematics is used in almost every field and also day to day life so basic understanding of this can actually help the students in long run in their jobs.
In conclusion , although the practical knowledge of skills is necessary for students future, I feel that this should be done at university level and a broad range of subjects should be taught in schools .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01807228916 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67411014207 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2265939435 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.6 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215710317334 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972295662868 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402674414481 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154509298251 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342380969466 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.