All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's life.
In contemporary society, parents are willing to the best chance for their children. There is an interesting debate about whether it is necessary teaching children in school or teaching them individually for some selected subjects.
In my opinion, the schools are playing an essential role for children's future.
Looking more closely the first view, there are several supportive points for it. Firstly, children can learn not only education but also team working. This will assist children to speak freely in their group or class. In addition, they can share their opinions to others. Secondly, children can be skillful at learning in different subjects. They know well how operate themselves in various positions. Moreover, learning at school give more opportunities, it helps to enter the top universities.
Turning to the next view, some parents support the view by some opinions. The first one is that children can learn more beneficial if parents hire well-educated teachers. This increases child's ability by learning individually. The next one is that children may choose one particular career that is why they do not have to learn everything besides the chosen one. As a result, they can find a good workplace.
In conclusion, taking everything into consideration, learning many subjects in school is sure of high importance as this will lead to the bright future of the child.
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- All parents want the best opportunities for their children There some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children s life 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n, taking everything into consideration, learning many subjects in school is sure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25225225225 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85033712375 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8726936484 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.875 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282059535223 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933717327846 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837273733666 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172230402746 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102634577906 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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