Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility of sugar intake.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Excessive intake of sweetener in one’s diet is bad for health. It is often argued that, governments must launch some control measures to ensure people’s usage of sugar with limited quantity. While others are of the opinion that, the responsibility of sugar intake lies with every individual only and it is not in the hands of anybody else. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the later argument only carries real weightage.
Firstly, it a well proven fact that majority of the people are getting impacted and becoming patients mainly because of the excessive intake of sugar in their daily routine. Therefore, as because this is a concern which affects the society on the whole, it is often considered that the government of states and the countries are expected to take charge inorder to control the business of sweeteners interms of commodity trade policies and procedures. Few people highly recommend that the governments can initiate numerous awareness programs and campaigns to create knowledge about the ill effects of sugar intake into the human body.
On the other hand, people do agree with the real scenario that the responsibility of sugar usage actually present with the individuals only. Every human is well aware of the health issues which arises out of excessive consumption of sweeteners in the diet. In this case, it becomes the duty of every individual to pay attention to their daily diet intake to have a healthy living. Human body conditions vary from one to another and so every individual cannot be treated with common practices. Instead one should follow their own body specific aspects to protect themselves from the damage.
In conclusion, even though people carry differences in opinion towards the responsibility of controlling the usage of sweeteners, it is mandatory for individuals to take control over their body conditions and to follow suitable lifestyle habits. Therefore in my opinion I strongly agree that, it is the responsibility of one self rather than the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19817073171 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81279205635 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533536585366 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7792449145 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.785714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241246220515 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077229466209 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634446290069 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149495074492 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386466969453 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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