It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the government consume a lot of money in saving wild animals through various projects. Whereas, other problems like poverty and hygiene needs dire attention from the authority. In my opinion, I agree that human’s lives should be on top priority instead of animals.
Firstly, poverty is cancer in a society which force people to die, therefore the government should solve such problems on prime levels. Low-income levels, as compare with the market, needs to raise the problems for a common man and thus increasing their hurdles day by day, therefore the government should increase their wages to support their daily needs. For instance, In India, around 10 per cent of the nation’s population is living below poverty levels. Hence, the government should raise funds to overcome poverty issues.
Secondly, sanitation and hygiene are other factors where government attention is much needed to support the disease-free environment for the public. Hygiene is necessary to save the lives of human from deadly infections. These projects need dire attention and a huge amount of money to control the spread of infections and maintaining cleanness. For instance, during every monsoon the malaria cases upsurge in the Indian subcontinent and cause number of deaths. Therefore, the government should educate the public on the disinfection system and construct proper draining in society, which will make society safer and clean.
In conclusion, humans should be priorities against animals and the authorities should have more focus on disease-free environment and the development of human society rather than spending money on saving wild animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47876447876 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75095373567 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8575835495 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129518264949 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449882989892 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302773066592 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080522583474 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183413682731 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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