It is often said that government spends too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?
saving wildlife is as important as saving enviornment from pollution in todays world. I partially disagree about the funds which are spend on protecting wildlife sanctuary.
To begin with, I would like to draw your attention to the current problems which we addressing. One of the major issue is about the global Warming. now, we know that there are several government bodies who are dealing to understand the behind increase in earth's temperature, it is also important as an individual to save the planet by using recycled materials. A lot of cost is involved to educate the people about usage of products which are enviornemental friendly, however due to high in cost these items are not pocket friendly. This is the aspect where government should more focus on.
Apparently, with globalization we have seen peripheral changes of the city which eventually unbalance the wildlife species. having said that, it is equally important for government to have strict rules and regulations against any unforseen activites which are happening in the wildlife. To illustrate the same, many animals lose their life either by forest fire or by floods. also, there are killings of wildlife species for their body parts such as skin, furr, teeth and many more.
To add, we have noticed the extinct of wildlife species which are now only seen in pictorial stories of text books in schools.
To summarize, government should invest the same amount of funds to ensure wildlife species are not harmed and are safe in their enviornment. however, they should balance the needs of people and address their issue as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, so, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10943396226 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66834348609 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0013914437 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0852813415755 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307747409207 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040861821832 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432515387218 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284114391509 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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