You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
what was the item .
why it was important that you get it immediately.
what you suggest the company should do now.
Dear Sir,
I am john smith, an active buyer from your website. I am writing this letter with regards to the recent purchase.
I have purchase a bed linen on 25th October which was suppose to be delivered by 26th October,however I have not received so far and it's more than 48hrs. Here are the details, might help you to identify or track. The order number is APQWENUY6790 and the delivery address is 32, stanford road, opposite orlem church, NJ - S2H 005.
I will highly appreciate if you can look into the same and get the linen delivered by End of the day as we are expecting few guests from tomorrow and we do not have any extra linen for bed. I would suggest you to either give me a confirmation about the delivery today or you can cancel the order and process the refund so that I can go and buy from the local supermarket.
Awaiting for your response at earliest.
Yours faithfully,
john smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with regards to the recent purchase. I have purchase a bed linen on 25th Octob...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...e a bed linen on 25th October which was suppose to be delivered by 26th October,however...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...e a bed linen on 25th October which was suppose to be delivered by 26th October,however...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
... suppose to be delivered by 26th October,however I have not received so far and its more...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d, opposite orlem church, NJ - S2H 005. I will highly appreciate if you can look...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
... and buy from the local supermarket. Awaiting for your response at earliest. Yours fai...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iest. Yours faithfully, john smith
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53012048193 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53176598536 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704819277108 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3122713299 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193799747193 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609812070959 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450275717665 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890278405464 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059264649105 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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