You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
– what was the item
– why it was important that you get it immediately
– what you suggest the company should do now
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to highlight about an item which I did not receive the day after which I was supposed to get it. I really felt very much embarrassed as I have placed many orders through your company website and I have not come under this situation ever before.
The item which I bought was a round collared T-shirt which I expected the delivery the next day but, unfortunately, I did not receive the same. The major reason for ordering in your website was that your company holds certified buyer satisfaction along with express delivery award. Moreover my cousin is getting married in a week time.Mainly I bought this for wearing on that occassion,eventually I could not.
I would suggest you to check where the T shirt have been misplaced or lost and send back to me at the earliest or I request you to refund the money back in one or two days. I hope this unexpected incident will not happen to me or anyone in the near future as we all trust your company ethics to a greater extent.
Kindly look into this and do the needful
yours faithfully,
Subarshan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...tion along with express delivery award. Moreover my cousin is getting married in a week ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Mainly
...ousin is getting married in a week time.Mainly I bought this for wearing on that occas...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , eventually
...ought this for wearing on that occassion,eventually I could not. I would suggest you t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 40, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: T-shirt
... I would suggest you to check where the T shirt have been misplaced or lost and send ba...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63131313131 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67352576695 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.5868618631 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.625 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258944730078 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938462380158 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695397874672 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127706174887 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806511906146 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.