In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime and how can we deal with those causes.
The crime rate in many countries has been increasing rapidly, as a result people around the world feel that unsafe to live in their respective places.The major cause for this is that the punishments for the crimes have become liberal nowadays.
In under developed nations like Africa, Zimbabwe the amount of individuals who commit sins are more compared to developing and developed countries. The major reason for this is that the government does not penalize the wrong doers instantly and vigorously, consequently the quantity is reaching to a maximum. Here theft, murders are very common. illegal trades are prevalent amidst these countries. sadly,the government officials are also behind this unlawful crimes.
Whereas in India which is a developing country, the misconduct ratios are lesser when balanced with under developed nations. In developed nations like USA, UK people will fear to commit a crime as they knew that the judgement will be more crucial and even may lead to death. nations like UAE sentence a person to death immediately if he misbehaves with a women.
The major cause for all these is illeteracy, unemployment and also political influence. We can solve this issue bt giving everyone proper education and allocating corresponding jobs to the desired persons.Here the role of parents play a vital role as they must advice their children what is good and bad and how to face the society effectively as well as carefully.
To conclude, severe punishments can only reduce crimes in future. One must fear before doing any illegal work and this can be achieved only by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, well, whereas, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24045801527 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74085401889 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8074274206 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175132751832 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499995558388 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418615952778 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894766988863 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340655146173 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.