You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.
Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:
• Greet your friend and say why you are writing.
• Briefly describe a news story in your country
• Explain why people are interested in it.
Dear Reema,
hope you are doing well. I am writing this in response to your query regarding the latest news items in my country. At present there are numerous stories going on such as change of some chapters in school curriculum, latest advancement in technology, launch of new car, exhibition of the latest fictional book, election results and many other yet the new novel published by moneta is the lime of all the daily newspapers.
So, today the breaking news is the novel called 'The family' written by moneta. A beautiful story Of a Joint family in which a man grapples to fulfill the needs of his children. He sacrifices almost everything for the betterment of his offsprings but when it comes to return the favour all his children turn their faces away from him. The father spent all his money for the future of his sons but they neglected all of his sufferings.
And also, The story explains that how that father came up with the solution to earn money when his children left him alone. Moreover, people in our country are more interested in this topic because some of the parents can relate themselves with the situation and that is the reason they were empathetic towards it.
I hope, you will like this story too. I will look forward to your reply about this undergoing news on such a fictional novel.
regards,
Meera
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...ge of some chapters in school curriculum, latest advancement in technology, launch of ne...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e more interested in this topic because some of the parents can relate themselves with the ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...rgoing news on such a fictional novel. regards, Meera
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69787234043 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42047251353 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634042553191 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6620317964 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119294861639 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492487610171 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577459104472 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793920822347 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585060973669 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.