"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records"
Camera be it video or picture always helps us to capture the lively moments. nowadays camera is a best friend of human beings. Written records proves to be more lasting and acceptable form of documentation. However, i agree that the video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life for following three reasons.
Firstly, camera record are advantageous form of documentation than written records. camera record can show very minute details which a human brain can forget during written documentation. For example, during 1993 riots in Mumbai the video footage played vital role in tracing accused.those video footage were always analysed years later by state police for proving the guilty.
Secondly, the image and video quality camera gives much accuracy during documentation. scenario missed by human eye can be well caught by a video camera and which can be reviewed later. For example, video camera used in cricket for reviewing decisions which on ground umpires are not sure of. verifying run-outs of batsmen which happens in fraction of seconds are capture by video camera and reviewed by umpires to give right decisions.
Finally, CCTV video cameras installed everywhere used in documenting quantitative information. Documentation of these footages can be very useful for civic bodies as well as police department. Returning to riot example mentioned earlier, relaying on video document for financial loss to store owners.
In sum, when it comes to capturing, storing and recalling events, video records are more accurate and convincing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 2235.4752809 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 248.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39112903226 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79290564292 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4790935914 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1333333333 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298171696193 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115420982729 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107022392191 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180955195177 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101993475301 0.0667264976115 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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