The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The speaker claims that the best way for a society to prepare to its young people for leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. I completely agree that cooperation can lead to successful journey and not competition. Young generation are the futures of the country, they play vital role in bringing best in any given condition that will benefit to them as well others.
Firstly, leadership is the quality which can make any field or organisation to touch the sky. When everything is falling apart a good leader is one who can lift them up and taste the success easily. Consider, for example in During world-cup 2019, New Zealand team was tearing apart as the tournament progressed it all needed a good captain who can motivate them to be a better in the middle. They knew only one way to reach the gaol is to keep cooperation with other players in field and out field.
Furthermore, competition can impede learning of the individual and eventually put the organisation at the risk. Competing with others can impede their own growth. Being selfless and cooperation with mates always showed the success rate high of the individual and organisation. For instance, India's richest man wanted to enter telecommunication sector, but he was not allowed to do so because of the non competing clause with his brother, it was equal to competition in own family putting their companies at risk.
Finally, competing with others never promote growth, every individual is blessed is with unique ideas and utilisation of them in accurate way is very vital. cooperating with other can lead to more bigger organisation that one would never believe. For example Fiat company who sell their cars were competitor of Tata Motors, but one good leadership quality in both companies managing director brought these two companies to collaboration for a better product. Today Tata Motors cars are fitted with Fiat diesel engine, thus giving them more profit than competing with each other.
In addition, it is the leader who makes the company more successful and reach heights, society should motivate young generation to come up with new ideas by cooperating with each other. Competition can impede them from growing in this dynamic world and in unpredictable circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Indias the richest'.
Suggestion: Indias the richest
...ividual and organisation. For instance, Indias richest man wanted to enter telecommunication s...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompeting clause with his brother, it was equal to competition in own family putti...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cooperating
... of them in accurate way is very vital. cooperating with other can lead to more bigger orga...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
...tal. cooperating with other can lead to more bigger organisation that one would never belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8259380117 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1023928409 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.764705882 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277531801051 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948952516109 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165415395871 0.0758088955206 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172165103169 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158648410424 0.0667264976115 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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