“There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws”
The speaker claims that the just laws is made to obey as a responsibility and unjust laws are meant to be ignored. I completely disagree that a law can be partitioned according to one’s interests and obeyed only if it is in their favour. Laws play important role when it comes to keep up harmony in a society of people with mélange mind set’s, where fairness of law depends on one’s personal value system.
Moreover, people tend to show more disobedience when it comes to unjust laws because they’re very much aware of government bodies in some cases paying little heed thereby able to overlook consequences. This is especially true when it comes to personal freedom. For example, in some part of country a motorcyclist with pillion behind has a self freedom towards law, because wearing helmet for rider is incumbent where'as a helmet for pillion is not given much importance; though it is a law for pillions too. The pillion here plays a chief role to hold out against unjust laws, while individuals with other value system might view such laws as just. People often compensate their safety which has to be number one priority of any individuals certainly being last here.
Furthermore, the second fundamental problem with the statement is that people disobeying unjust laws has adverse effect on a society, environment and daily lives also being hamper under such circumstances. For instances, sudden rise in chemical industry’s is deleterious to the environment, resources which plays vital role in cosmopolitan cities are very much affected by these industries which emit toxic waters in near by lakes and oceans. Such laws are designed to maintain public health and they cannot be circumvented by which nearby residence would have impact on health. Complying with these rules and regulation would accelerate green environment and healthy lives of surrounding but for industry’s the law is subjective totally according to one’s interests.
Another, when it comes to our home and places which are close to our hearts, people tend to have parochial attitudes towards them and different to the outer world. For instance, at home or sacred place’s decorum is highly maintained but the public places are littered, again this is subjective, completely depending on ones personal interest but the end result’s clearly justifies that unjust laws are drifting in wrong direction, where one’s responsibility as a citizen is hampering image of the country. This would have overall impact of nations economy by impeding tourist from other nations.
In addition, Law should always have one meaning in people’s mind and they have to blindly follow it to ensure healthy surrounding and uplift next coming generation by setting up a good example. Rather than behaving upon one’s personal interest, people should take action which would benefit the nation first, which will help justice to serve.
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| 2023-03-24 | Ali Khanzadi | 50 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o keep up harmony in a society of people with mélange mind set's, where fair...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'self freedom'.
Suggestion: self freedom
... a motorcyclist with pillion behind has a self freedom towards law, because wearing helmet for...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...e industries which emit toxic waters in near by lakes and oceans. Such laws are designe...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e designed to maintain public health and they cannot be circumvented by which nea...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...umvented by which nearby residence would have impact on health. Complying with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2488.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28237791932 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8815694605 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564755838641 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9413547235 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.352941176 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7058823529 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 5.21951772744 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281067396492 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970243790015 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085610335184 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169213715529 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871417199579 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.