"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose
views contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."
stress while learning can certainly keep one from thinking efficiently. A person needs to have a calm mind when he/she is trying to understand some concept or situations. Not only this, stress can tamper with the ability of an individual to think beyond what is written in the textbooks.
when I was part of a decision making group in my college, many a times I used to have people who agreed with my plan or strategies. it makes things easier to implement when many people are aboard with your decision. it sort of gives me confidence in myself that I have a good plan and I am a good decision maker. So this naturally affects my day to day life decisions as I know that I make good choices.
however, if we think of a scenario in which a group of people agree to you no matter what your views are, then it is certainly a problem. one is no longer challenged by another person while making decisions. this may lead to false self pride and can seriously affect an individual's life or an organization's work. if one does not have people to contradict one's decisions or ideas, then there would never be creative thinking involved. No matter how hard a person may try, there is a limit to which he/she can think. it is always good to have people with different views or opinions while building up an idea or making a key decision as it would bring about the best results. if the famous mathematician, Ramanujan, had the same thinking like his family, he would have never crossed the sea and we would have never got a genius.
In the end, it is all about balance. people may feel comfortable sharing their ideas with like-minded people. it helps one to evaluate his/her own skill as the other person is experienced in the same domain as him/her. But, having contradicting opinion is also good as they might get a chance to self-evaluate themselves. however, it is important for one to keep a calm mind, which can be obtained if one trains it to be when such disagreements happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52646239554 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64403074507 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537604456825 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2456242113 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5263157895 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132506354152 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434359477273 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430079852407 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849426130685 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329215487677 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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