As development increases in other nations, majority of the citizens are deciding to stay alone recently than in previous years.
In this essay, I will argue that the demerits of staying alone outweighs the merits of staying alone.
To begin with, I will like to indicate that, one negative development in human life of living alone is insecurity. Most countries as they develop, security becomes a major problem. Kidnapping, murder,rape cases and arm robbery is high because the attackers notice that victims live alone. Also, people who live alone has from many robbery cases rather than people living together. For example,a survey done by the US FBI in 2009 states that 60% of murder cases recorded in 2008 were people living alone.
Another important point I will like to raise is that, lack of socialization can lead to committing of suicide. Many people commits suicide when alone and it's becomes tedius to even notice their death since there is no one closer to them. Unforseen deaths and attempts on people's own by themselves is the consequences of living alone, many citizens becomes victim of suicidal cases which they could have been saved if there was any one closer to them. For example , a research conducted by Links research centre base in Switzerland in 2016 States that, 90% of all suicide case recorded was as a result loneliness.
In conclusion, it is not advisable for people to live alone as a Nation develops and every citizen should speak against it knowing it consequences as the essay above describes.
- In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 61
- The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99610894942 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57429710574 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1553840674 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226032335648 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872188511915 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694017525885 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123489774414 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541564343032 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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