Some individuals think that is unlawful to imprisoned animals in a place such as zoo while other people believe that doing this has positive gain to both human beings and the animals. Both of these views will be discuss in this essay and I strongly agree with the statement that says it is unacceptable to keep them in captive.
To begin with, preserving these animals in a place like look like their natural habitat encourage tourist to visit the country. There are some animals which are rarely seen physically or even come closer to. But keeping them in the zoo will interest people from other regions that do not have such opportunity to come and see them. Thus, increasing and bursting the economy of the country that have them. Such is seen in Nigeria, in whispering palms in Badagry where visitors can see life lions and tortoises. Again, preserving animals in zoo aid learning in children. As most of this creatures are seen in some cartoon on television and they always imagine how they feed and reprocreate. Taken pupils to see these animals are life aid better learning and assimilation especially in basic science subjects in school curriculum for students.
On the other hand, as other also opined that keeping them in the zoo will be advantageous to both human beings and the living creations is that, it will help help to prevent them from endangering human life. If some of these wild creatures are not restricted by keeping them in zoo such as tigers and elephants they can destroy properties like houses and causing accidents in high ways. In addition, animals kept in the zoo are saved from extinctions because they can always see their kinds to mate with. And not only that, they can also be used to cross breed other animals to make them stronger. Examples are seen mostly ,when dogs are been crossed breed with tigers. Such dogs are used majorly for security purpose in porous checking points.
In conclusion, in my view,I believe it is improper to keep animals in zoo as it will facilitate learning among pupils. As it is also agreed upon by others because it will be of great impact to both humans and these animals since ,it will prevent harm to people and killing of the creations indiscriminately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75710594315 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48101848654 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498708010336 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.825270347 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.277777778 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287065079779 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08929959731 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573278505996 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199054097013 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333265781526 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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