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It is widely accepted that all of us had been gotten decisions that helped our lives. Some people may hold the view that as young people have not any experience, we do not need them. Some other, nonetheless, take an opposite point and believe that we need to juveniles because they have a wonderful idea in sixty percent cases. Personally, I have a penchant toward the latter, In the next two paragraphs, I will aptly delve into my reasons and I will cogently substantiate their perspective.
The first aspect to point out is that everyone at a young age does not take part in the decisions for a difficult situation, therefore, they will miss the beautiful taste of the failure. Also, Steve Jobs says somewhere: “defeat has the introduction to succeed”. Besides that, the only cause to our take that experience of tomorrow will be our failure of today. The noteworthy statistics revealed by research conducted in the psychology department at Goethe University which is well-known the center in Germany shows that, if parents do not give the opportunity to their children before leave family, they are the encounter with difficult problems.
Another equally remarkable point in corroborating my stance is society improving. The best way to increase efficiency in the future community is to talk about problems with young people. In fact, this is a win-win game where juveniles’ idea not only is growing up but also is solving problems in society. A personal example can drive this notion home. My oldest uncle has two boys and my cousin’s successes in their lives. they do not need anyone in their decisions. Now, both of them have an influence on important determination in our community. Based on the consequence drawn from an exhaustive survey managed by the University of Illinois at Edwardsville today, seventy present of people who affect the society are the same at young or child age participated in an important dilemma.
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- TOEFL Integrated: Altruism:Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, being sure to specifically explain how they cast doubt on points made in the reading 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 4 3
- 3top1 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...cousin's successes in their lives. they do not need anyone in their decisions. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03086419753 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93759718373 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6129750888 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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