The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

Grammar and spelling errors:
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The bar chart have illustrate the percentage of men and women in Aust...
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...lian who worked out frequently in 2010. Overall, it can be concluded women did m...
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...e age group, beside 15 to 25 years old. For the women, most of the women in diff...
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...nt age group have around 20 percent more than men that have a regular physical ac...
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... than men that have a regular physical activities .The women than have the habit in the ...
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... that have a regular physical activities .The women than have the habit in the ag...
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...hat have a regular physical activities .The women than have the habit in the age g...
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...ctivities .The women than have the habit in the age group from 15 to 54 were incr...
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...d start decline from 55 to 65 and over. For the men, the men in the age group of...
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...e fall end in the age group of 45 to 54.There have a steady increasing tendency from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13855421687 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2501834573 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8949137256 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.4 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 5.23603664747 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386521951276 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224905576187 0.103423049105 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812620768019 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247806748451 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780071698049 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.32 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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