It is an undeniable fact that the prevalence of sports and exercising has been surging continuously in many nations around the globe in contemporary time. In my opinion, this scenario has a plethora of merits and hence is a constructive development. The reasons for my perception are elucidated in ensuing paragraphs.
The foremost reason for my belief is that modern sports involve physical activity that improves one's health. In other words, outdoor activities not only ameliorate people's fitness but also reduce the stress of their daily life as such sporting activities bifurcate one's focus from daily hurdles and can enjoy freely with friends. Additionally, major sports require more than one individual to play and hence, it also proliferate one's social circle and eventually one can get myriads of benefits by working in a team.
Furthermore, involvement in some physical exercise is also proven beneficial in this competitive world. As people are swamped with daily tasks, sometimes they have paucity of time to even prepare food and in turn, nowadays general public consume fast food more than ever and as it is rich in fat and sugar, it is quite advantageous for citizens to do some exercise to mitigate the issues that they might incidentally get by eating processed foods. In addition, as per a survey conducted by Canadian Atlantic newspaper, people that follow a strict regime of performing exercise has better stamina and caliber compare to the counterparts and hence are more contented and confident in there life.
To summarize and recapitulate, it can be deduced from aforementioned deliberation that there are plenty of merits associated with sports and exercise such as alleviating one's stress and burgeoning one's physical and mental capabilities. Therefore, i suppose that a person should always spare some time to perform such activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, incidentally, so, therefore, i suppose, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93277783339 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.767357952 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826067623004 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303262222969 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.014061181698 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482963177446 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00735971667471 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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