Dear Sir/Madam,
The reason I am writing to you is that I am searching for 2 BHK flat in South Delhi preferably in Motibagh area. I have been working in Chennai for Microsoft as the software engineer and I was recently recruited in TCS located in Nehru Place.
My date of joining on the new job is 20th July 2019 and I will be accompanied by my wife and 4 years old son. I will be commuting to the office by public transport so I am looking for the nearest place from the office for accommodation. Some of my preferred areas are Motibagh, RK Puram, Safdarjung Enclave. My initial stay is for a minimum of 2 Years however it may change as per the employer requirement. Since my kid will be turning 5 this year, I will be glad, if you can also suggest me several good schools nearby my preferred locations. I can afford Rupees 15-20 thousand per month for such amenities however I am for negotiation if I will be provided my preferred location.
You can also share several photographs of the house or flat to my email id or to my WhatsApp.
Email Id - dineshxxxxxxx@yahoo.in
Whatsapp Phone Number - 9xxxxxx94
Thanking You,
Dinesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...my email id or to my WhatsApp. Email Id - dineshkaushi27@yahoo.in Whatsapp P...
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Line 15, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... - 9971710994 Thanking You, Dinesh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67804878049 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00964244998 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.3063370855 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.9 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0888542645111 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406943091247 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446712728033 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432661302385 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044233965962 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.