Space exploration cost tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages of spending money on space exploration?
Technological advancement has become one of the competing races amongst most advanced countries of the world. Out of many technology researches, space exploration is one, that most governments spend their annual budget on which is more praiseworthy than disgraceful.
To begin with, the development of internet, a product of space research, has made it possible for the entire earth to be considered a global village. People can communicate within and outside the earth and also know the current affairs of the world by sitting next to their gadgets. Moreover, it is satellites that has been helping to understand earth and its life forms including the universe clearly from a distance. Life wouldn’t have become so easy hadn’t this innovation helped predict the past, present and future of the earth’s processes. For example, prediction of soon approaching disasters has saved millions of lives by alerting probable victims and taking actions pronto.
The flipside of it is that the significant share of citizens tax has been argued to be spend on secondary things like this one where more important aspects of human life such as curing epidemics, fighting poverty and so on should be of priority. For instance, instead of spending large sum of money on space shuttles, developing infrastructures on the ground that would help reduce drudgery of the marginalized people by providing employment for unemployed people, medication for patients with life threatening diseases such as AIDS and cancer and facilitating easy movement from one place to other.
To sum up, while there exist drawbacks for prioritizing outer space research that consumes huge share tax payers money, benefits are more as space exploration advancement is making life easier on earth by warning about disasters, facilitating researches from outside the earth surface among others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: than
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...outside the earth surface among others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43493150685 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95588022489 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7734092191 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.7 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155442039596 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532726076261 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684413925856 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10428700706 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653419497041 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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