With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be, Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
it is true that these days family ties are not as strong as it used to be and families are less closed and family members usually scoffer the lack of intimacy. there are some serious reasons for this trend and government authorities and family members should take steps to tackle this problem.
there are various reasons why people argue that families getting divorce easily and we face more family breakdowns and consequently there is no integrity among family members. Firstly, couples are less committed to each other and this scheme is apparent in daily news of love affairs and cheating. Secondly, in the past getting divorce was a taboo in each society and individuals tried to make family relationships stronger but unfortunately nowadays it becomes popular among fellows to get divorce. Finally, families spend less time with each other since they have to work all day long to make a living for their families and as a result parents are not involved in children's upbringing and children grew up under grandparent's supervision. A salient example of this is the Denmark in which government could diminish the divorce rate by enhancing the economy conditions almost 20%.
Governments and individuals should address this problem by finding tangible solutions. One solution is providing better social welfare by government authorities which will give the families the chance to work less and spend more time with family members. Not only families would be impressed by this solution, but also society would be benefited as well since fewer people will get divorce due to the financial difficulties. Furthermore, by making awareness among the residents of each society and educating children about the importance of family as well as expansion of morality and conventions, the average quality of life will increase. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in times magazine, indicates that improving the economic conditions in 2008 in UAE could impact the family relationships up to 12.5%.
To conclude, although the families are more concerned with economical issues and try to provide families with best life conditions, they should strengthen the family ties and expand their relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 5.05154639175 376% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 937.175257732 200% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 358.0 206.0 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24301675978 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7560434911 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 127.690721649 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 290.88556701 204% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9652761025 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.384615385 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 4.34317383033 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314523596932 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115619796117 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063199287666 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211920799532 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359305935838 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 8.37731958763 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 70.7449484536 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 41.2886597938 235% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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