You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
explain what you like bout the cafeteria
say what is wrong
suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir,
I am writing to share my concern about cafeteria and some suggestion how we can improve to make it more better. I like many things in cafeteria especially the beautiful location surrounded by huge pine tree or the garden in front of cafe which got beautiful flowers.
management doing so well to cater the mess.
one thing which I want to bring in your notice a large number of student have their three time meals in college. The cost of a plate is 50 rupees And I believe it is quite costly for student and moreover the the quality of diet is also not good most time food not cooked properly and quality too decrease few times. Another concern is the limited space to sit. we have very less count of chairs and table as compare to crowd. therefore we have to wait for hours to grab a table.
Therefore, I would like to request you look into these two issue. I can also help you in buying more furniture. one of my friend have furniture shop in main market, there we will get a interesting amount of discount.
I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting to share my concern about cafeteria and some suggestion how we can improve t...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...uggestion how we can improve to make it more better. I like many things in cafeteria especi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Management
...y I have mid day meal in college only. management doing so well to cater the mess. one...
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Suggestion: One
...ent doing so well to cater the mess. one thing which I want to bring in your not...
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Line 6, column 48, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ng which I want to bring in your notice a large number of student have their three time meals in ...
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Line 6, column 205, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...s quite costly for student and moreover the the quality of diet is also not good most t...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...s quite costly for student and moreover the the quality of diet is also not good most t...
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Line 6, column 293, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to decrease'?
Suggestion: to decrease
...me food not cooked properly and quality too decrease few times. Another concern is the limit...
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Suggestion: We
...er concern is the limited space to sit. we have very less count of chairs and tabl...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...f chairs and table as compare to crowd. therefore we have to wait for hours to grab a tab...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...f chairs and table as compare to crowd. therefore we have to wait for hours to grab a tab...
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Suggestion: One
...also help you in buying more furniture. one of my friend have furniture shop in mai...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... shop in main market, there we will get a interesting amount of discount. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33678756477 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22924412825 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658031088083 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7420302712 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.75 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128803498333 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437561472753 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465171059915 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713744887497 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535083959785 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.