You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
• explain what you like about the cafeteria
• say what is wrong with it
• suggest how it could be improved
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you regarding our college canteen. Although most of the facilities are up to the mark, few improvement need to done as quickly as possible.
The hygiene of the cafeteria is superb due to housekeeping staff’s constant effort. Moreover, items in the menu are suitable for most of the college student and pricing as well. Furthermore, seating arrangement is quite unique and able to accommodate more than 50 people at a time though area is not adequate.
Few issues I would like to mention that can be resolved soon. Firstly, air conditioning is not working properly and situation inside the hall becomes unpleasant during peak hours. Secondly, few staffs are required in the cooking area as one cook and three support staff is not sufficient.
Air condition servicing is due since last two month that need to be address first to have comfortable environment during lunch time. In the college magazine, we can publish one ad for new staff hiring.
Hope, you will take my concerns and suggestion with priority. Thanks in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu Kalita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[5]
Message: Did you mean 'do'?
Suggestion: do
...up to the mark, few improvement need to done as quickly as possible. The hygiene ...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'staff' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'staffs', 'staves'.
Suggestion: staffs; staves
...king area as one cook and three support staff is not sufficient. Air condition s...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... three support staff is not sufficient. Air condition servicing is due since las...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12637362637 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83129154454 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703296703297 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.910428481 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7692307692 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176949268148 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523555059765 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473202313737 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862343997927 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413678968887 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.