Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being honesty has a pivotal role in every individual's life. Some people believe that telling the truth is the significant consideration in relationship between people and some disagree. I am on the opinion that people should tell truth under any circumenstances. In the following paragheraph I illusterate the reason of that.
First of all, if people tell truth to each other trustworthy among them increases. Without that relationship between two people is meaningless and has a bad influences on the people's mind. In fact, honesty and trustworthy has a deep connection and if one of that disapeared other ones destroyed too. For example, I have a close friend that because of her honesty I can count on her in every situation since I know she never lying
Secondly, Lying cause individuals forget fact materials. Telling the truth has one results but lying have several consequences that after a time individuals forget real story about that. For example, when I was at university one of my best friend always lying and that cause after a while other ones did not trust him anymore. Therefore, lie pave the way for other issues such as loss the friendship and confidence
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people should tell the truth in any condition because of creating trustworthy and not forgetting real issues.
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- TOEFL T P O 47 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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- Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ing honesty has a pivotal role in every individuals life. Some people believe that telling ...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...her in every situation since I know she never lying Secondly, Lying cause individu...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'lies'.
Suggestion: lies
... every situation since I know she never lying Secondly, Lying cause individuals fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05454545455 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89513698844 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3768922615 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128307749753 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583453443921 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480473913966 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089795930152 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570482374553 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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