You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
<p class="MsoNormal">Dear Sir,<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">I’m writing this letter to inform you, I will like to </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">participate in this upcoming seminar that is being organised by our </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">organisation.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">I have been with this organisation for 3 years however </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">currently I am working in transcription department. My career path is </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">managerial, I always take a lead in giving trainings, arranging workshops, </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">developing/training new hires. My manager suggested me to take part in this </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">seminar. We believe this will give exposure to me and I will be able to learn </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">allot of skills by the end of this seminar which then I will be able to </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">spread/utilise on our new hires that I train.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">I will like to gain some information regarding this seminar, </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">Dates and where this will take place. If we have any program planned, can I </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">have a copy of it, most importantly if I can get to know about the overall cost </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">and accommodation process as this will not be supported by my department. I will </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">have to make arrangements for myself accordingly. I will be thankful to you if </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">you can provide me with these details so I can make arrangements.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal">Your Sincerely,</p><p class="MsoNormal">Malik<o:p></o:p></p>
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-16 | astrlw@hotmail.com | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Sir,
^^Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...;m writing this letter to inform you, I will like to ^^^^
Line 1, column 1096, Rule ID: ALLOT_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a lot of' (=plenty)?
Suggestion: a lot of
...pan style='font-size: 1.1em;'>allot of skills by the end of this seminar which...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1394, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...n style='font-size: 1.1em;'>I will like to gain some information regarding...
^^^^
Line 1, column 2135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...ass='MsoNormal'>Your Sincerely,
Malik<...> ^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 937.175257732 210% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 8.57641921397 4.54256449028 189% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.99301059833 2.54303337028 354% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545851528384 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 290.88556701 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.41237113402 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.541107654 44.8134815571 443% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.571428571 76.5299724578 367% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.7142857143 16.8248392259 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0533253920661 0.216113520407 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395864159667 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202227175103 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533253920661 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 8.37731958763 421% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.76 70.7449484536 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 3.82989690722 475% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.9 7.45979381443 307% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.08 8.71597938144 380% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.