Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.
It is irrefutable that education plays an imperative role in building the successful career of a person. People have different opinion about the options of schools, whether it would be boarding school or day school. Both perspectives have merits as this essay will demonstrate.
Firstly, a boarding school is the best option for those parents who can not devote too much time to their child or are living in an area that is not suitable to bringing up a child. Secondly being in a boarding school can teach pupils the real definition of discipline and independence. Working on a class project without asking for parent or guardian's help, getting themselves ready for class, doing their own laundry or getting to an event with friends. Students strive for independence, and with that come the ability to manage time more efficiently. In addition, this type of schools provide a great teacher accessibility. Boarding schools emphasizes more on a unique preceptor and disciple relationship. Teachers at boarding schools are much more reachable to their students, as they are on campus longer than other teachers.
On the other hand, some people think that boarding school does not have much contribution in uplifting in a student's life. Nowadays many day schools offer co-educational environment which is an important requirement of today's world. Interacting with opposite sex in the early ages enable children to be comfortable in the presence of opposite sex. It teaches them to show respect and love towards the opposite sex. Day schools are less expensive also. Tuition fee in these schools are comparatively cheaper than boarding schools. That is a big reason parents opt for day schools. Children are used to the comforts of home. Day schools offer that comfort to the children and thus student can stay with their parents. Furthermore, if a child gets injured or sick parents can be with their children immediately. This is something that most of the parents consider.
To recapitulate, education widens a person's mental horizon. To get proper education the only thing matters most is the education itself. Schools are the medium only. Boarding schools can bestow with discipline and independence but day schools pledge with comfortable atmosphere which most of the students seek for and it also helps parents to monitor their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ite sex. Day schools are less expensive also. Tuition fee in these schools are compa...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...r. To recapitulate, education widens a persons mental horizon. To get proper education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82616877007 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542105263158 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6212341445 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243558694757 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067081369383 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459417925207 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156570473082 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347492284059 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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